Trains
Robert Okaji
1
In the marrowbone of night,
your song parts the fog.
I never knew the secrets entrusted there.
I never knew that cinders and steel
could lie so passionately
and still believe that the watchman’s hours
would evaporate and leave us scratching for more.
I have stolen time.
The windows remain closed and shuttered.
Even the wind turns away.
The track narrows.
You call.
Again.
2
Sometimes song seems the only respite,
the rhythm of clashing cars
and moments stretched beyond the next bend
to that point where light winks out.
We both know this lonely tunnel.
Payment is due.
I have always exited alone.
3
Another evening, and red smoke completes the horizon.
Your ribs stretch for distance,
and while I cannot see their end,
I know by sound
their lot.
Sing for me.
It is not
too close.
“Trains” was originally published in Lightning’d Press (Issue 8), and is included in Robert Okaji’s chapbook, If Your Matter Could Reform, to be released in April 2015 as Dink Press’s initial offering in its National Poetry Month Series.
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Robert Okaji’s words, if not magical, are mysterious and evoke long forgotten emotions.
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Your comments, as always, are appreciated. Thank you.
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Bob just keeps getting better and better…so what’s your excuse for not buying his book “If Matter Could Reform”? It’s the right thing to do and only $1 in the e-book version!
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Thanks for reblogging, Ron!
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A poem on love and loneliness. Beautifully crafted work by Robert Okaji.
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Thanks for reblogging, Steph!
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Love this poem, Robert!!
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Thanks, Robin. Much appreciated.
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The trouble with writing a memorable first line is that it grips the reader too hard. It makes leaving it too difficult; but I must say there are rewards.
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Another concern, of course, is that whatever follows won’t match up, won’t equal the opening.
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We can’t be concerned about that. We write. That’s it.
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Yes, this is probably more of a concern in revision, in making certain the entire piece works. But you’re right – we write. And then it gets interesting. 🙂
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To be honest I am BAD at editing.
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“Sing for me. It is not too close.
Wonderful…
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Some things are, except when they’re not. 🙂 Thanks, Andreea!
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